Tuesday, 15 July 2008

Heaven To Hell


Here’s a story of a simple yet complex girl and a well natured guy. She was a girl who never experienced love, she had many crushes, many roadside lovers, admirers but still there was an immense desire in her of being loved (being loved doesn’t mean being pampered by relatives). She wanted to love someone and someone who would love her passionately. This desire was a result of her friend circle too. Just at the age of 14, many guys pretended to love her truly, but she did not get attached to anyone, she was not ready to accept anyone wholeheartedly.

Then suddenly one day things changed for her, she met a guy who was wonderful in her eyes, she liked him and respected him. The boy was a handsome chap who could attract any girl easily. But all those ‘any girl’ would be a foolish or blind. Life was a joke for him, whereas she always took her life seriously. She befriended him and found that as a friend he was nice, caring, and sweet. But he did what he always used to do (how could he make any girl just his friend). The guy’s philosophy was “It’s an unfair life, so many girls and so less time.” Whereas the girl believed that “It’s an unfair life, so much to learn and so less time.” He knew that this girl is a serious one so he blackmailed her emotionally, unknown of the fact that she was being blackmailed, she got lured by his sugar-coated words and ultimately she FELL in love (after falling everyone gets hurt) .One day both decided to convert their friendship into love.

The guy took her for granted, he knew that anything can happen but this girl can never cheat on him, he knew that at any cost she would never leave him .He took the relationship very casually. While he flirted with other girls, his intention was not to hurt her and she also never minded because she trusted him. Her blindness deceived her from recognizing the real face of that guy. But when he crossed his limits, she complained again and again and again and again he fooled her by his fake emotional statements. He loved her a lot (that’s true) but he loved every girl a lot. She had a lover; but she was not satisfied. Here also the fault was her only because she always asked god for a true lover but she never mentioned that she wants a guy who would love only her (so be specific).

He could not get rid of philandering and she could not get rid of complaining. Both got pissed off with each other. After keeping mum for about a week she went up to him and asked if he wants to carry on any relation with her or not. He took few minutes to answer then lastly he said no, keeping hope in her heart she asked WHY? He said because she is not his type.

LOVE FEELS LIKE HEAVEN BUT HURTS LIKE HELL

Moral : 1) Never being loved is better than being loved and lost.
2) Getting lured by the sweet-coated words of bitches can lead one to the ditches.

6 comments:

  1. Very nice constructed. The writer conveys the feelings very well. Well written.

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  2. a really good piece of writing.
    very genuinely expressed feeling.
    keep up this thing,,, and all d best ,u were actually able to express the actual feelings :)

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  4. very well written and very well expressed,u r a master of emotions .
    how are you so perfect in putting them into words?
    god knows what he has created.
    hats off to you

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  5. very well and genuinely written

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  6. a very genuine way to express the exact feelings. I guess You really showed through this piece of writing that you can use any ordinary or common topic as a challenge and make it this hearty and interesting, really a very nice style of writing.

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